he's still such a kid. it's very wrong that that hits my kinks.
lol you know the funny thing about this is that in my first draft of this story, Spike was a year younger, but instead of being kicked out the foster system he was a runaway and really was tough and street smart and everything. But then I went back and rewrote everything to make him more William like. Which I think works much better and is more interesting and probably hits your younger kink much better ;)
As for Darla's mysterious "he", you're just going to have to wait and see.
I can promise you there will be another chapter in a week, hopefully you won't be too purple by then. And thanks, it's great to know you're enjoying this story, cause I'm very excited about it myself.
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Date: 2007-05-10 08:32 pm (UTC)lol you know the funny thing about this is that in my first draft of this story, Spike was a year younger, but instead of being kicked out the foster system he was a runaway and really was tough and street smart and everything. But then I went back and rewrote everything to make him more William like. Which I think works much better and is more interesting and probably hits your younger kink much better ;)
As for Darla's mysterious "he", you're just going to have to wait and see.
I can promise you there will be another chapter in a week, hopefully you won't be too purple by then. And thanks, it's great to know you're enjoying this story, cause I'm very excited about it myself.