ext_30892 ([identity profile] zoesmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] icemink 2007-07-19 08:49 am (UTC)

Another update, lovely!
"Oh? So what do you call your weird kinky games. You got me drunk and had your way with me," Spike insisted.
Boy, do I want to smack Spike! And then hug him, because he’s in a really bad situation and feels confused. Angel is the only one that can help him though. He shouldn’t puss him away.

"Next time don't bother fighting. Then again," Angel's breathe seemed to tickle Spike's neck as his voice dropped even lower. "Maybe you should, just makes it feel that much better when you squirm."
I got chills! Wow, very sexy and seductive!

"Because," Angel said, leaning in so that he loomed over Spike. "You're the one who came all over them last night."
Again… Whoa! I love Angel’s voice here. I’m not surprised Spike reacted the way he did. Not at all!

I love the way you write their relationship. Very realistic!

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