I really liked this! I ended up not reading the previous chapters as I wasn't sure I'd have time to vote, but I may just go back and check them out, because this really captured my attention even when I don't know what happened in the previous parts! My favorite line was That was one of their golden rules: the only solicitation to be done on the job was the illegal kind. --that had me cracking up! I also liked the twist with the non-alcoholic beer. Well done :)
ps. Did selene2 do your banner? It reminds me of her style.
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I really liked this! I ended up not reading the previous chapters as I wasn't sure I'd have time to vote, but I may just go back and check them out, because this really captured my attention even when I don't know what happened in the previous parts! My favorite line was That was one of their golden rules: the only solicitation to be done on the job was the illegal kind. --that had me cracking up! I also liked the twist with the non-alcoholic beer. Well done :)
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